Elmore - Revision history

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2014-01-09T21:40:18Z

‎Slaying the Great Dragon

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2014-01-09T21:38:44Z

‎Slaying the Great Dragon

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2014-01-03T17:55:19Z

‎Slaying the Great Dragon

AntiMatter16: /* Death & Legacy */

2013-10-08T08:28:49Z

‎Death & Legacy

AntiMatter16: /* Campaign Against the Last Barbarian Invasion */

2013-10-08T08:25:03Z

‎Campaign Against the Last Barbarian Invasion

AntiMatter16: /* Death & Legacy */

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‎Death & Legacy

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2013-10-08T08:14:25Z

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AntiMatter16: /* Death & Legacy */

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‎Death & Legacy

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 ==Slaying the Great Dragon==
-During summer of his 16th year, Elmore vowed he would slay the [[Great Dragon]], the consort of the Dragon Draco Melekarche, that was terrorizing the nearby region. As no one had ever slain a dragon, Elmore was ridiculed for his claim, but to the surprise of the kingdom, he slew the dragon with his brother Belisar, beneath Castle Ephesus and brought back proof, the Orb of Destruction, whose evil power tainted the soul of Elmore and his brother Belisar. Elmore was then titled "Prince Elmore the Swift and Deadly Sword" and given his own Brigade by his father, King Gregor. Years later, the King Remarked that although his sons had killed the dragon, the Orb they returned with tainted them, causing them not to return as heroic warriors, but defeated souls.
+During summer of his 16th year, Elmore vowed he would slay the [[Great Dragon]], the consort of the Dragon Draco Melekarche, that was terrorizing the nearby region. As no one had ever slain a dragon, Elmore was ridiculed for his claim, but to the surprise of the kingdom, he slew the dragon with his brother Belisar, beneath Castle Ephesus and brought back proof, the Orb of Destruction. Elmore was then titled "Prince Elmore the Swift and Deadly Sword" and given his own Brigade by his father, King Gregor. Years later, King Gregor Remarked that although his sons had killed the dragon, the Orb they returned with tainted them, causing them not to return as heroic warriors, but defeated souls.
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 ==Slaying the Great Dragon==
-During summer of his 16th year, Elmore vowed he would slay the [[Great Dragon]], the consort of the Dragon Draco Melekarche, that was terrorizing the nearby region. As no one had ever slain a dragon, Elmore was ridiculed for his claim, but to the surprise of the kingdom, he slew the dragon with his brother Belisar, beneath Castle Ephesus and brought back proof, the Orb of Destruction. Elmore was then titled "Prince Elmore the Swift and Deadly Sword" and given his own Brigade by his father, King Gregor. Years later, the King Remarked that although his sons had killed the dragon, the Orb they returned with tainted them, causing them not to return as heroic warriors, but defeated souls.
+During summer of his 16th year, Elmore vowed he would slay the [[Great Dragon]], the consort of the Dragon Draco Melekarche, that was terrorizing the nearby region. As no one had ever slain a dragon, Elmore was ridiculed for his claim, but to the surprise of the kingdom, he slew the dragon with his brother Belisar, beneath Castle Ephesus and brought back proof, the Orb of Destruction, whose evil power tainted the soul of Elmore and his brother Belisar. Elmore was then titled "Prince Elmore the Swift and Deadly Sword" and given his own Brigade by his father, King Gregor. Years later, the King Remarked that although his sons had killed the dragon, the Orb they returned with tainted them, causing them not to return as heroic warriors, but defeated souls.
 ==Campaign Against the Last Barbarian Invasion==

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 ==Slaying the Great Dragon==
-During summer of his 16th year, Elmore vowed he would slay the "Great Dragon", the consort of the Dragon Draco Melekarche, that was terrorizing the nearby region. As no one had ever slain a dragon, Elmore was ridiculed for his claim, but to the surprise of the kingdom, he slew the dragon with his brother Belisar, beneath Castle Ephesus and brought back proof, the Orb of Destruction. Elmore was then titled "Prince Elmore the Swift and Deadly Sword" and given his own Brigade by his father, King Gregor. Years later, the King Remarked that although his sons had killed the dragon, the Orb they returned with tainted them, causing them not to return as heroic warriors, but defeated souls.
+During summer of his 16th year, Elmore vowed he would slay the [[Great Dragon]], the consort of the Dragon Draco Melekarche, that was terrorizing the nearby region. As no one had ever slain a dragon, Elmore was ridiculed for his claim, but to the surprise of the kingdom, he slew the dragon with his brother Belisar, beneath Castle Ephesus and brought back proof, the Orb of Destruction. Elmore was then titled "Prince Elmore the Swift and Deadly Sword" and given his own Brigade by his father, King Gregor. Years later, the King Remarked that although his sons had killed the dragon, the Orb they returned with tainted them, causing them not to return as heroic warriors, but defeated souls.
 ==Campaign Against the Last Barbarian Invasion==

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 ==Slaying the Great Dragon==
-During summer of his 16th year, Elmore vowed he would slay the "Great Dragon", the consort of the Dragon Draco Melekarche, that was terrorizing the nearby region. As no one had ever slain a dragon, Elmore was ridiculed for his claim, but to the surprise of the kingdom, he slew the dragon beneath Castle Ephesus and brought back proof. He was then titled "Prince Elmore the Swift and Deadly Sword" and given his own Brigade by his father, King Gregor.
+During summer of his 16th year, Elmore vowed he would slay the "Great Dragon", the consort of the Dragon Draco Melekarche, that was terrorizing the nearby region. As no one had ever slain a dragon, Elmore was ridiculed for his claim, but to the surprise of the kingdom, he slew the dragon with his brother Belisar, beneath Castle Ephesus and brought back proof, the Orb of Destruction. Elmore was then titled "Prince Elmore the Swift and Deadly Sword" and given his own Brigade by his father, King Gregor. Years later, the King Remarked that although his sons had killed the dragon, the Orb they returned with tainted them, causing them not to return as heroic warriors, but defeated souls.
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 ==Death & Legacy==
-Without the supplies and the Orb of Defense, Elmore and his troops were unable to reach the reservoir defenses and were killed at the reservoir creek. According to Gaiseric's survivors report, Elmore was the last to die. Magical lightning was the weapon that slew him. According to Alaric's memoirs, Elmore died of an enchanted curse and must die once for each of his massacred victims.
+Without the supplies and the Orb of Defense, Elmore was unable to reach the reservoir defenses and was killed at the reservoir creek. According to Gaiseric's survivors report, Elmore was the last to die. Magical lightning was the weapon that slew him. According to Alaric's memoirs, Elmore died of an enchanted curse and must die once for each of his massacred victims, but can only be slain by magical lightning.
 When reinforcements did arrive, they found the barbarians were truly weakened. Elmore had lost but fought a noble battle. Both Alaric and Gaiseric were defeated and the remaining barbarians scattered back into the country side. However, Elmore's soul found no rest and reports suggest his ghost still roams the barbarian regions.
 King Gregor built a massive castle to honor Elmore.

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 To counteract Alaric's spell, all of King Gregor's priests fasted and prayed. A magic orb was revealed to them, now known as the Orb of Defense, whose purpose was to stop teleporting enemies. A large amount of currency was appropriated from the treasury along with The Orb of Defense and dispatched to Elmore via the Royal Fleet to the Lighthouse.
-Although Elmore and his brigade were faced with the combined forces of the Alaric and Gaiseric barbarians clans, Elmore won several battles, captured many of Gaiseric's band and massacred Gaiseric's heretics. Elmore and his brigade held for as long as they could, but the Orb of Defense and treasure did not arrive in time. Elmore's brigade was eventually defeated. Elmore and the survivors were forced to retreat toward the reservoir before reinforcements could arrive. Elmore left his mark to denotate his retreat, but the treasure and its guard were intercepted by the barbarians before reaching Elmore. However, the treasure and the Orb of Defense were never found by the barbarians and were presumed lost.
+Although Elmore and his brigade were outnumbered by the combined forces of the Alaric and Gaiseric barbarians clans at the Battle of the Lighthouse, Elmore won several battles, captured many of Gaiseric's band and massacred Gaiseric's heretics. Elmore and his brigade held for as long as they could, but the Orb of Defense and treasure did not arrive in time. Elmore's brigade was eventually defeated at the lighthouse and Elmore was forced to retreat toward the reservoir before reinforcements could arrive. Elmore left his mark to denotate his retreat, but the treasure and its guard were intercepted by the barbarians before reaching Elmore. However, the treasure and the Orb of Defense were never found by the barbarians.
 ==Death & Legacy==

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 ==Campaign Against the Last Barbarian Invasion==
-Many years ago, Prince Elmore was sent to fight the last barbarian invasion. However, the size of the invasion was underestimated as Alaric, a Warlock of immense power and and evil, had united the Alaric and Gaiseric barbarian clans. Elmore's brigade was faced with the combined forces of the Alaric and Gaiseric barbarians clans. Alaric also had discovered how to transport large numbers of troops into Elmore's defenses. The Battle of the Lighthouse began and Elmore's brigade soon needed reinforcements and supplies.
+After many years of noble service, Prince Elmore and his brigade were sent to crush the last invasion by the heretical barbarians. However, the size of the invasion was underestimated as Alaric, a Warlock of immense power and evil, had united the Alaric and Gaiseric barbarian clans. Alaric also had discovered how to transport large numbers of troops into Elmore's defenses. Elmore's brigade needed reinforcements and supplies.
-To counteract Alaric's spell, all of King Gregor's priests fasted and prayed. A magic orb was revealed to them, now known as the Orb of Defense, whose purpose was to stop teleporting enemies. A large amount of currency was appropriated from the treasury along with The Orb of Defense and dispatched to Elmore via the Royal Fleet.
+To counteract Alaric's spell, all of King Gregor's priests fasted and prayed. A magic orb was revealed to them, now known as the Orb of Defense, whose purpose was to stop teleporting enemies. A large amount of currency was appropriated from the treasury along with The Orb of Defense and dispatched to Elmore via the Royal Fleet to the Lighthouse.
-Elmore and his brigade held for as long as they could, but the Orb of Defense and treasure did not arrive in time. They were eventually defeated at the Battle of the Lighthouse. However, Elmore had won several battles and captured many of Gaiseric's Band. He massacred them at the lighthouse, but was forced to retreat toward the reservoir before reinforcements could arrive. Elmore left his mark to denotate his retreat, but the treasure and its guard were intercepted by the barbarians and the Orb of Defense was lost with the treasure before reaching Elmore.
+Although Elmore and his brigade were faced with the combined forces of the Alaric and Gaiseric barbarians clans, Elmore won several battles, captured many of Gaiseric's band and massacred Gaiseric's heretics. Elmore and his brigade held for as long as they could, but the Orb of Defense and treasure did not arrive in time. Elmore's brigade was eventually defeated. Elmore and the survivors were forced to retreat toward the reservoir before reinforcements could arrive. Elmore left his mark to denotate his retreat, but the treasure and its guard were intercepted by the barbarians before reaching Elmore. However, the treasure and the Orb of Defense were never found by the barbarians and were presumed lost.
 ==Death & Legacy==

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 Without the supplies and the Orb of Defense, Elmore and his troops were killed before reaching the reservoir defenses. According to Gaiseric's survivors report, Elmore was the last to die. Magical lightning was the weapon that slew him.
-When reinforcements did arrive, they found the barbarians were truly weakened. Elmore had lost but fought a noble battle. Both Alaric and
+When reinforcements did arrive, they found the barbarians were truly weakened. Elmore had lost but fought a noble battle. Both Alaric and Gaiseric were defeated and the remaining barbarians scattered back into the country side. However, Elmore's soul found no rest and reports suggest his ghost still roams the barbarian regions. According to Alaric's memoirs, Elmore died of an enchanted curse, and must die once for each of the victims.
 Gaiseric were defeated and the remaining barbarians scattered back into the country side. However, Elmore's soul found no rest and reports suggest his ghost still roams the barbarian regions.
-King Gregor built a castle to honor Elmore, however it is not known whether this was before or after he was killed.
+King Gregor built a massive castle to honor Elmore.